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Saturday, 16 February 2013

Because YOU are MINE : an AMIRIN fan fiction (oneshot) part 2

* i kept forgetting to post the second part to AMIRIN
* this is all from the writer and i did not change any single word or alphabet from the original text


WARNING : 18SX CONTENT. YOU WERE WARNED. DON’T BLAME MEH FOR MY GREATNESS IN WRITING FANFICS. BHAAHHAHAHAHHAHAAH K                             -sincerely writer-
(POV is point of view. The story’s view from the character)

Chapter 2

KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK.
Fakhirin was preparing himself to go to class when he heard the door knocked by someone.
                “Who could that be,” he thought. The white shirt he was wearing was unbuttoned, showing the singlet with similar color he wore inside. One could tell that he was in a hurry; his slack pants were all crinkled up. He hasn’t had time to iron the pants as he woke up late that morning. The faces of Amir flashed in his mind. He sighed. Although his worriedness for Amir left him awakes until 4 in the morning, he could not blame him. In fact if there is any person to blame, it would be his very own self.
The feelings he had for Amir are just too much for him to handle.
Therefore he had made a decision.
He must confess his love to Amir today.
KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK.
The knocking counts increases as he walks slowly towards the door while trying to button up his shirt. Fakhirin got fed up with the shirt and ignored it instead. He hurriedly opened the door.
At the moment the door was opened, he was surprised.
Stood in front of him was a good looking young lady, of he thought her age must be around his. She was wearing a rather sexy outfit. Fakhirin observed her red dress for a while. The dress was short, revealing her perfect legs. To top up with that, the dress she was wearing also showed up part of her chest. Fakhirin looked down at his feet, feeling ashamed. It was weird for him to have lust towards women like her because he had always liked Amir. And before he could speak any word to her, she abruptly pushed him inside the house.

Fakhirin’s POV
Ouch! What is this woman’s trying to do? Arghh my head feels really hurt right now. What great strength to push me for a small woman like her. Ehh what? Why does she smiling at me? Oh no what is she going to. . ahh wait!
“YOU! What you think you’re trying to do!?” I yelled at her, taking her right wrist off from the singlet I am wearing. I cannot believe I heard myself breathing heavily. Yes, I do have feelings for women. I just happen to realize that fact just now, when this woman trying to slid her hand beneath my singlet.
Okay here’s the thing. I’ve never touched any woman before.
And I had already one guy that I love.
But damn why does it feels so good when it is all wrong?
“Shhhh,” she said as she placed her finger gently on my lips, as a sign for me to stay silent. She looks so beautiful from close angle like this. What does this woman’s intention towards me anyway? I can barely move myself by all these seductions. I can feel her hands on upper part of my body, trailing every inch of them with her fingers. The warmth from her body is transferred to mine as she leaned herself to me. Is this how it feels like? I always knew woman’s body feels hot, but this heat I felt is like burning, bringing a sensation I could not resist. I stood frozen, feeling numb.
My thoughts vanished at the glimpse of a figure at the front door.
It was a person that I had admired for a pretty long time.
It was Amir.

Writer’s POV
Amir froze at the sight of Fakhirin’s ‘guest’. He accidentally witnessed a scene where the love of his life being touched and kissed by a woman whom her body resembles top models in those reality shows.
He had always confirmed that Fakhirin does not has any lover in his lifetime. Fakhirin himself told him.
But he knew now that he might have lots of them.
“Uh, oh. . sorry.” Amir apologized before quickly disappear from Fakhirin’s sight.
“No, Amir. Wait!” Fakhirin shouted his name to stop him.
“Amir! Wait!” he shouted while trying to free himself from the woman. Fully desperate, he pushed the woman onto the floor with all his might. He does not care anymore about the woman or even anything else in the world, all he cares in his life is Amir.

---END OF CHAPTER 2--- KTHANXBYE

PART 1

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